HELP

AAAAAAH! My Creative Writing teacher wants everyone in my class to submit a piece of work to a literary magazine! YIKES! If you have the time to kill and want help me out please go to my other blog here and read "Red Shoes" and "The Forgettable Life of Patrick Sullivan" and tell me which one you think is better. Keep in mind that I am still working on my rewrite of the Patrick Sullivan story. THANKS!